

Developmental Editing
What it is
Developmental editing is the initial stage of the editing process, focusing on the big-picture aspects of your manuscript. If your manuscript feels “complete” but something’s not clicking, this is the stage to shape your story into its best version. I’ll help ensure your narrative flows, your characters feel real, and your themes hit home.
When to choose developmental editing
You should choose developmental editing if:
You’ve finished your draft but feel unsure about its structure or character depth.
You suspect there are plot holes, pacing issues, or emotional gaps.
You want honest, story-focused feedback before diving into line edits or copyedits.
Process
This is a three-stage process:
First Read: I provide inline comments and detailed feedback covering character development, plot structure, pacing, and flow.
Revisions: You take the time to revise based on the feedback.
Second Read: I review your changes, with a focus on tone, pacing, and overall cohesion.
Final Polish: After your final tweaks, I do a final pass to catch remaining inconsistencies, clunky spots, or errors—prepping it for the next stage.
What You’ll Walk Away With
A stronger, more cohesive story.
Clear insights into what’s working and what needs attention.
Confidence in your manuscript’s structure and emotional depth.
Investment
Developmental editing starts at $0.02 per word.
Curious if this is right for your book?
Let’s talk! Reach out for a free consultation and see if developmental editing is the next best step for your story.